Conscience.pdf
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sanjibo
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"Step forward from shadow, light shines LIFE"
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English poem from India written by sanjibsaha Aniketa.
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on May. 16 2009
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| Size: 13.4kb |
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| hi, another message that the mind alone wouldn't understand, must be felt with the heart. Interpretations may vary but I'm sure that you're able to tap certain emotions of your readers. Nice work. |
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Wonderfully worded  |
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| Very deep and out in front. Nice way to write... Honest my friend... You are a great writer :-) |
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on May. 25 2009 |
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| Your poem ``Conscience`` is well developed with emotions but one part sounded and looked off. In the second stanza ``Red for the uneven sky of self`` sounded awkward this is a little suggestion ``Red for self's uneven sky`` . Aside from that I am pleased with what I read. -Keep the ink flowing!-caballero7137 |
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| True, no one can survive without love and I agree about the color of blood statement. However finding true love could be quiet tough job. Lol. Hey surely lovely, read. |
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| Well poetry is all about interpretation and sometimes that can differ from the way other people read..feel the words. So really to suggest that some of us won't understand the depth of this poem is a bit insulting. Anyway the feeling that I get from your words is that it's about love, a love that maybe is wrong and your conscience won't let you go with it flow with it. It reads (to me) about love all the way through and the last line 'You the kissing corner of conscience' ties it all up neatly. Very good read :)) |
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  Correct me if I am wrong. I understand it is a love forbidden or forsaken. The anger of the deceived was there but the love to the deceiver was strong and that made things hard. It is the conscience that is speaking now. It is a very idiomatic poem. Was delivered with full of emotion! |
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This has much depth to it and many may not quite understand it so I would suggest they read it through a few time very good work
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